Her Scars
Her eyes always used to ask me,
“Why not me”?
Is it because i am not beautiful?
Or this world doesn’t know how to loves the
girls with scars?
Always leaving me speechless.
Everytime i wanted to explain to her that,
Yes! It was her scars which scared me, i
couldn’t.
Because
It was these scars i never wanted to turn into
wounds,
It was these scars which made me realise that i
was not the one who could cherish her
immense beauty.
Maybe yes it was these scars,
Which stopped me from ruining her.
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Very well written poem Jhavinder!!!
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So deep.. I love it. As we say, our scars are beautiful ♥
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Lovely post. Keep up the good writing. BTW why are my comments not going through? Yesterday u asked me some questions I was trying to answer but my comments were not being posted. Only one comment is being allowed on every post. Maybe check your settings. Anyways, keep up the good work!! 🙂
Thank you so much ☺. Maybe this is due to the security reasons. I have only allowed comments from verified users. But don’t know why it’s happening with you?
No problem!! Maybe my net speed was slow or some technical issue!! 😀
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Ohhhhh!!!! Got it 😀
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Looking forward to read more of your posts.
Sure…
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Thought provoking poem. Great job.
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That’s truely Beautiful ❤✨
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Awesome post
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Touchy, enjoyed reading it…
The first word is a typo error, *here scar. noticed so mentioned it.
Thanks i will correct it..
Beautiful honest words, so well-written, tender and heart-felt. It touched me. Love these lines which I feel give the special climax of emotional intensity to your poem: “Yes! It was her scars which scared me, i/ couldn’t./ Because/ It was these scars i never wanted to turn into/ wounds,”.Yes, we are all scarred after the wounds have healed. Our bodies and souls are made up of scarred landscapes. Very human. Loved it! Thank you so much for stopping by my blog. I really appreciate this!
Thank you so much
You should have atleast copied it properly, there are sooo many mistakes.
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Beautifully expressed. You have a real gift!